first round edits done

[julesjones]

Had my first round edits on And if I offered thee a bargain sent to me on Tuesday, but didn't start doing anything with them until last night, courtesy of assorted medical annoyances. Just sent my comments back to my editor, after much pondering, There weren't that many edits, but a lot of them were to do with things that affected the voice of the story. Not so much making it sound like not-me, because they didn't, but changing the feel of who it was narrated by and how. There's only one of those that I'd dig my heels in over, though.

Still not comfortable using Word 2007 (there was some minor aggravation trying to find the "save as" option), but I can use it if I have to. I think. With any luck I won't get an email back saying "I can't see your changes!"