Starcraft 2: Story Time
Jun. 20th, 2013 11:51 amIt has been suggested by some that the campaign story in Starcraft 2 is hammy, obvious, and slathered in thick, cheesy melodrama. I can’t really argue with this, but I don’t think Blizzard’s storytelling has gotten any worse. I think the problem is that their production values got way better.
It’s sort of intuitively understood that the events we see during gameplay are abstracted and stylized a great deal and that we shouldn’t take them literally. I mean, if we did we’d have to conclude that a barracks was about the size of your average living room, tanks are minivan-sized, and the dreaded Protoss Carrier is barely larger than a schoolbus. We don’t want our small units to be teeny tiny things that are impossible to click on and we don’t want our large units to cover the entire screen so we can’t see under them. Averaging out the sizes solves both problems. We also have the sides wearing vibrant colors and nobody can see more than twenty meters in front of their face.
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| Try to picture that marine climbing into the cockpit of that plane. |
There are really good gameplay reasons for this, and nobody minds these abstractions because the game would look ridiculous if we tried to depict it in a photorealistic way.
Keep in mind that while the original game had animated cutscenes, they were not used to tell the story. Often the events depicted were completely unrelated to the stuff you were doing. Once in a long while a main character might make an appearance, but generally these little vignettes were just there to set a mood and show what the world “really” looked like outside of the abstracted depictions that we were given during gameplay. They were a fun reward for completing the recent block of long, grindy missions.
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The bulk of the story was told in mission briefings. Every mission briefing was basically a Google Hangout with the principal characters, but with lower video quality. (The future of the past always looks kind of strange.) They would talk, argue, emote, and threaten, all while the same few seconds non-lip-synced head animation looped.
Sometimes it was even told in blocks of text.
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Like the abstracted visuals of the gameplay, the story itself is told in broad, exaggerated strokes. Since the story happens with talking heads, it would be very, very easy for this to become tedious. The writers keep it lively by filling the story with vibrant, over-the-top characters. You’ve got flawed heroes, noble idealists, scheming opportunists and devious backstabbers. The performers lay it on thick and try to sell the drama with just their voice.
And then we get to Starcraft 2…
In Starcraft 2, we’re no longer constrained by the graphical and budgetary limitations of 1998. Blizzard has heaps of riches, tons of skill, and lots of processor power to throw at the problem. If they want their story to look like a movie, it can. It does.
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Continuing the practice of telling the story with talking heads is no longer viable. Okay, for a lot of us that would have been just fine, but we all know that some people would say it looked “cheap”. Over the past fifteen years Blizzard has perfected the art of making gripping, epic cutscenes. Their efforts now exceed even Square Enix, the previous masters of lavishly over-produced spectacle and fan service. It was inevitable that they would want to bring that talent to bear when it came to telling their story. We could imagine a hypothetical timeline where the suits, the designers, the producers, the artists and the writers all signed off on the notion that they didn’t need eye-grabbing, YouTube-friendly, viral-ready shorts to tell their story. But only if we imagine really, really hard.
So they changed the format of the story from conference call to a series of animated shorts. I’ll admit it looks great, but the transition has done odd things to the tone.
Check out this scene:
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That’s a cutscene from Starcraft 2. It’s a flashback to a moment from Starcraft 1. In the original game, the same dialog played out in raido messages while you were managing your units. Now it’s a movie. When I saw the newer, sexier version of this scene my first thought was, “Wait. Why did he leave her behind again? Wouldn’t it be super-useful to have a badass Ghost like Kerrigan on our side? What possible benefit could there be to ditching her?” Suddenly the story is a movie and now I’m expecting movie-type things like proper character motivations.
In the first game, Mengsk busts Raynor out of prison. No explanation, nothing. He just does. Duke changes sides and all his nebulous forces come with him, no questions asked. And all of this is fine because at this removed distance we don’t expect to see much detail. We just need the characters to be iconic and vibrant.
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But now we don’t need ham and overwrought dialog. If we want to show Raynor is harboring a grudge, we can have a cutscene where he slowly loses his cool. He doesn’t need to jump into Google chat with us and tell us he’s upset. We can zoom in on his eyes and see him nursing that old wound, deep down. We can see him pouring himself another whiskey from a now-empty bottle. We see him carrying around that revolver with one bullet and see how he fidgets with it every time Mengsk comes up in conversation. The game can show instead of tell, and it’s actually really good at doing so.
It’s a bit like the transition from stage play to motion picture. On the stage, performers needed exaggerated body language and emoting to convey the action to the people in the cheap seats. Then we put those performers in front of a movie camera and their performances seemed outrageous to the point of unintentional comedy. In the first game, Arcturus Mengsk is a cartoonish mustache-twirling villain in a cartoon world and it’s fine. (Oh yeah, spoiler for you time-travelers from 1998: Mengsk is a bad guy.) In Starcraft 2 Arcturus Mengsk is a cartoonish mustache-twirling villain in a semi-serious universe and he suddenly seems less like an insidious threat and more like a jackass troll.
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So what does Blizzard do in a spot like this? Do they dial back the characters so they fit in this newer, more detailed world? Then the old characters might not feel the same and they could come off as bland. Or should Blizzard keep the characters as vibrant as ever, thus making them seem kind of ridiculous? This is the way they went, and yeah – people do suffer from a bad case of being Incredibly Obvious Archetypes.
I haven’t really played the Halo series beyond the first game, but I gather it’s suffered from the same growing pains. A faceless space marine was just fine for a 2001 shooter, but as the series went on he became increasingly anachronistic. Everything in the world became more detailed except the main character. They couldn’t “update” Master Chief without running a very real risk of ruining him (giving him a face would be like giving Gordon Freeman or Samus Aran a voice) but they couldn’t keep him the same without creating this odd tension between the characters and the world.
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| Zeratul’s dialog is so cheesy that Kraft Foods is currently researching ways to put it on macaroni. |
So what I’m getting at is this: The characters in Starcraft were kind of trapped in their little Google Chat windows just like Master Chief is stuck behind his mask. Yes, the ending of Wings of Liberty is absurd and transparent fan-service, and the subsequent twists are similarly silly. The flashback to Zeratul’s vision of the future is an overly convoluted and brute-force way of establishing the stakes. But I think this is the result of tension between the origins of Starcraft and this newer, sleeker, higher-budget version. These new twists aren’t sillier than the previous events, we’re just looking at them up close and we’re suddenly judging them differently.
And now, total spoilers for everything Starcraft.
Having Said All That…
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Even allowing for cartoonish comic-book level storytelling, I’m still kind of perplexed at some of the choices the writers made here. The entire first campaign is spent turning Kerrigan from Zerg to Human form again, only to have her reverse the process a few missions into the next campaign. Kerrigan has now gone from Human to Zerg to Human to Zerg. The mystique and horror are gone. It’s just a switch the writers can flip.
Kerrigan re-Zerging herself does strike me as a Dumb Thing for her to do, but in the context of this topsy-turvy world it’s hard for me to argue against this from a character perspective. Everyone feels VERY STRONG EMOTIONS and WILL! NOT! BE! STOPPED! by their adversaries. Jim, Mengsk, Sara, General Duke… they all do some ludicrous things because they’re VERY UPSET about some damn thing.
I am reminded of the death of Commander Shepard at the start of Mass Effect 2, only to bring him back a couple of minutes later. It doesn’t matter if this “makes sense” from the standpoint of in-universe lore, it’s a terrible thing to do to your story. Having things happen and then un-happen and then re-happen just shows the audience that this universe is arbitrary and that the rules don’t mean anything. When I run into stories that reverse themselves like this it makes me want to skip to the end. The author [hopefully] has a fixed destination in mind, and they see the space between here and there as a void to be filled with shouting and bullets.
I don’t dislike the Starcraft 2 story. But now I retroactively enjoy the Starcraft 1 story a little less.
Eljay Android Client
Jun. 20th, 2013 08:12 amMAO
Does one trust anything ascribed to Polonius?
Jun. 20th, 2013 12:38 pmSitting in bijou London City Airport (we so overestimated the timing), reading the paper and noting a piece about the new secularised Guide vows and critically addressing the idea of being true to oneself.(Have still not worked out how to get links in when posting via tablet.)
And thinking about all those people who would undoubtedly aver that their conduct (or as some might define it, trollery), is being true to themselves and suggestions that their behaviour is not in accordance with the highest standards of civil converse is 'censorship'.
Just throwing that out while waiting for gate announcement.
Time travel
Jun. 20th, 2013 06:25 amRoles
Jun. 20th, 2013 05:53 amLost and found in Royal Leamington Spa and Warwick
Jun. 20th, 2013 10:08 amhttp://spiralsheep.dreamwidth.org/44062
Enjoy!
In which there are lost and found in Leamington Spa and Warwick
Jun. 20th, 2013 10:04 amFound
1) I found 2 x £1 + 1 x 1p coins in three separate places.
2) I found myself in the immediate area of one arrest by police and possibly a larger police operation (I couldn't decide whether the dodgy men hanging around were plain clothes police trying to look shifty or locals actually being shifty).
3) I found a satanic hat on a tomb in the crypt of a church.
Lost
1) I completely lost the piece of paper with my return train times and my walk notes.
2) I temporarily lost my dignity (disability is a harsh mistress).
Apart from that, there were main roads lined with shopping-sheds (and me wishing I'd chosen the more northerly route), two rivers, a canal, and varied suburbias.
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I didn't have time for either the local museum and art gallery in Leamington or the Market Hall museum in Warwick (which reputedly has a large stuffed bear on display) but a post-flan coffee-hunt into Warwick town centre was rewarded with this statue of local hero Randy Turpin, 1928-66, whose father was originally from British Guiana but had been invalided to Blighty from the Somme during the First World War. In 1945 Turpin became the youngest ever Amateur Boxing Association of England champion and the first black boxer to win an ABA title, although South African Andrew Jeptha arguably won a British title fight in 1907 and British communist-activist Len Johnson would probably have won in the 1920s if black boxers had been allowed to compete then (and they were far from Britain's first famous black boxers as, for example, it's recorded that at "Marybone-fields", on 13 June 1791, Joe Leashley beat Tom Treadway in 35 minutes for a prize of 4 guineas, and African-Americans Bill Richmond and Tom Molineaux both had careers in British boxing in the late 18th and early 19th centuries). Randy Turpin went on to win the British and then European middleweight titles before reaching the peak of his boxing achievements in 1951 when he became World Middleweight Champion, which also made him Britain's first black World Champion boxer. The temporarily defeated African-American Sugar Ray Robinson, who won the World Middleweight title back 64 days later, showed his true style when publicly acknowledging Turpin's win with the words: "You were real good. I have no alibis. I was beaten by a better man." Turpin went on to win the British and Empire (Commonwealth) light heavyweight titles.

June challenge
Jun. 20th, 2013 09:23 amHello Flâneurs! We're just over halfway through the month and it's great to see all the challenge reports. There's just one thing... everything so far has been in the UK! So as an extra incentive, I will be offering a small extra surprise gift to the first person who posts a June 2013 challenge report from outside the UK.
I'll also note that in the three years of running the challenge, so far nobody has done subtheme I (b): "Get on the first bus that comes along (and that you're able to get onto). Stay on the bus until you reach the 10th stop or the end of the route, whichever comes first. Get off and navigate your way home by a method of your choice."
Self-Publishing
Jun. 20th, 2013 02:50 amYou want I should hold him for you?
Story: "No Winter Lasts Forever" (Part 41)
Jun. 20th, 2013 12:46 amFandom: The Avengers
Characters: Phil Coulson, Clint Barton, Natasha Romanova, Tony Stark, Bruce Banner, Hulk, Steve Rogers, Betty Ross, JARVIS, Bucky Barnes, Nick Fury.
Medium: Fiction
Warnings: Mind control. Inferences of past child abuse and other torture. Current environment is supportive.
Summary: A mission in Russia introduces the Avengers to the Winter Soldier. Steve wants Bucky back and will stop at nothing to make that happen. Everyone else helps however they can.
Notes: Asexual character (Clint). Aromantic character (Natasha). Asexual relationship. Sibling relationships. Fix-it. Teamwork. Canon-typical violence. BAMF!Avengers. Bucky!whump. Vulgar language. Drama. Rescue. Hurt/Comfort. Emotional whump. Survivor guilt. Friendship. Confusion. Mind control. Memory loss. Slow recovery. Nick Fury makes stupid-ass decisions. Fear of loss. Arc reactor. Fluff. Nonsexual ageplay. Making up for lost time. Tony Stark has a heart. Games. Trust issues. Safety and security. Howard Stark's A+ parenting. Obadiah Stane's A+ parenting. Brian Banner's A+ parenting. Food issues. Multiplicity/Plurality. Sleep issues. Non-sexual touching and intimacy. Yoga. Personal growth. Family of choice. ALL THE FEELS. #coulsonlives.
Begin with Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8, Part 9, Part 10, Part 11, Part 12, Part 13, Part 14, Part 15, Part 16, Part 17, Part 18, Part 19, Part 20, Part 21, Part 22, Part 23, Part 24, Part 25, Part 26, Part 27, Part 28, Part 29,Part 30, Part 31, Part 32, Part 33, Part 34, Part 35, Part 36, Part 37, Part 38, Part 39, Part 40.
( Read more... )
somewhat weekly reading meme
Jun. 19th, 2013 11:15 pmA Letter of Mary by Laurie R. King (#3 in the Mary Russell series)
The Privilege of the Sword by Ellen Kushner (Riverside #2), audiobook narrated by Ellen Kushner, Barbara Rosenblat, and others
Lavinia by Ursula K. Le Guin
What did you recently finish reading?
Lilith's Brood, (aka Xenogenesis), Octavia Butler. I loved this so much even though I was seriously creeped out by it. Alien aliens! Real biology! Ambivalence, adaptation, allies, bonding, captivity, coercion, communication, conflict, consent, enemies, family, freedom, gender, genetics, genocide, healing, hierarchy, identity, knowledge, needing, reproduction, resisting, sex, symbiosis, telepathy, tribe, wanting, war, xenophobia.
These essays are linked from the Wikipedia page; I posted them before but I thought they were worth posting again.
"Dialogic Origins and Alien Identities in Butler’s XENOGENESIS" by Cathy Peppers
Octavia Butler’s Xenogenesis Trilogy: A Biologist’s Response by Joan Slonczewski
August Heat by Andrea Camilleri (Montalbano #10). Audiobook. Montalbano is a Sicilian cop. Almost all the novels are about sex crimes, and I usually figure out the plot before the end, but I like them anyway. The translator and narrator are really good.
What books did you acquire this week?
The Wings of the Sphinx by Andrea Camilleri (Montalbano #11)
Worth a silver spoon
Jun. 20th, 2013 07:07 amI believe the done thing in this situation is to call one's friendly neighbourhood beekeeper and have them taken away, but actually I feel rather honoured by this visitation. (My mother feels similarly about the lizards that occasionally come into her garden. Less so about the slow worms that the cat brings into her house.)










