Finished revision pass on Ship to Shore

I've finished the first revision pass on Ship to Shore with another 2300 words added today for a final length of 15600 words. Feeling well pleased with that. :-) With that out of the way, I shall tackle some other tasks tomorrow, not least of which will be assorted overdue beta-reading. I might actually be able to make sense of other stories now that I've finished the core dump of the Spindrift universe.