Is there some originality in the language, for example in the similes and metaphors used, or is it full of hackneyed, over-used phrases? (Language can be grammatically correct, but full of boring cliches.) I'd agree with this (adding the sad rider that as usual it's always much easier to explain where something is bad than when and why it's good...)
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Date: 2009-06-24 09:27 am (UTC)