draft of "Bargain" synopsis

[julesjones]

I used my website blurb as the basis of the synopsis after all, although it needed a bit added. Draft so far - any thoughts?

A modern man meets one of the sidhe, and finds that legends are true, but the sidhe have changed. They have a new bargain to offer mortals who bring them fresh stories - nobody will leave their domain after a single night to find that years have passed in the mundane world. But there is still a price, one he discovers too late -- once you do leave their domain, you can never go back, no matter what or who you've had to leave behind.

Comments

[jhall1.livejournal.com]

Will most of the readers of your synopsis know who the sidhe are, or would a one sentence explanation be in order?

[julesjones]

Good point. Not sure about that one. New epublisher, doing a lot of erotic romance in various sub-genres, but also with a new spec-fic e-zine. Thinking about it, in those circumstances I'd expect the editorial staff to know, and that's who the synopsis is for.