And first revision pass done
Sep. 29th, 2013 02:40 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
julesjonesJust completed the first revision pass on "Nice Tie", a job that has been outstanding for far too long. But this weekend I had both a functioning brain and the necessary uninterrupted time, and have been chugging through it. I'm still not entirely satisfied with the last four chapters, but I think I've dropped enough foreshadowing of one point into earlier chapters now, and I've managed to add some business to break up the blocks of dialogue.
Not really enough business, I suspect, but I'm about to send it through to Alex to see if it reads more smoothly to her now. It does still need work, but at this point I'd be happy to send it to my editor if she wanted it in a hurry for a first look. It's currently 42 kwords, so that's going to be decent short novel length for an epubbed romance, even if it doesn't get any longer in the editing.
Not really enough business, I suspect, but I'm about to send it through to Alex to see if it reads more smoothly to her now. It does still need work, but at this point I'd be happy to send it to my editor if she wanted it in a hurry for a first look. It's currently 42 kwords, so that's going to be decent short novel length for an epubbed romance, even if it doesn't get any longer in the editing.