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Nov. 16th, 2008 11:07 pm
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470 words today, in large part filling in around the bitty bits from yesterday. It still needs a bit of work and slight in-fill, but that section is more or less coherent now rather a selection of bits that need connecting together. Need to contemplate the next sex scene now -- I was thinking of having Mark going slightly dominant, partly to demonstrate the change in their relationship over the years, but given the setting and context I can see Steven yearning for a little boss-secretary role-playing, just to revisit memories. Maybe start with one and move to the other, showing Mark indulging Steven and Steven knowing and appreciating it.

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Date: 2008-11-17 02:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] growlycub.livejournal.com
That sounds really intriguing. :) I can't wait for it to be finished!

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